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9/22/09

Evening

He pressed his lips against hers, her face glowing red with a deep blushed. His tongue sliding into her mouth, her knees went weak and the only thing holding her up was him. His dark bluish blackish hair hanged easily on his head while his dark eyes stared into her greenish eyes. The lips departed and she released a happy sigh, only for moment she was met by another kiss. He was gently edging her down to her bed.

"Hey Fuuka?" A voice asked

"What?!" she asked snapping her laptop closed quickly.

"Oh it's just you Minato-kun!" she said nervously.

"You okay Fuuka?" he asked and she nodded her head yes.

"I want to go to Tarturas tonight and was hoping you would tell everyone." He said and she nodded and he walked away to go talk to Yukari.

She watched him walk toward Yukari. Yukari had a perfect height, prefect legs, perfect everything and she was popular and Fuuka wasn't. Yukari was the type of girl that guys at Gekkoukan High would go after and hit on, but Fuuka was the girl at school where the guys wouldn't even give her the light of day.

9/23/09

Evening

He was leaning over her, she looked up to her and nodded yes and he kissed her again and his kisses moved from her lips to her neck.

"Oh Minato I love you!" she yelled as he bit her neck. Of course she loved him! How couldn't she? He was there everyday, testing her food listening to her speak, helping her to become more important to the team.

"I love you too Fuuka!." He said back extremely happy.

The shirt was off and he moved down.

Minato appeared behind her and moved to tap her should but something caught his attention. "Oh Minato I love you!" his eyes went wide as he read farther down the screen as she continue to type her love story! His eyes went wider as he continued to write about their love scene! Finally he got the courage to speak up.

"Fuuka!" he yelled!

She jumped up and looks around to see Minato staring at her and the laptop with eye's so wide she thought they would fall out! She quickly closed the laptop and blushed deeply.

"C-Can I help you?" she asked extremely nervous.

"What are you doing!" he answered with a question.

"Ummm….." she didn't know how to rightly respond.

"Minato-kun?" Yukari called and he didn't like the awkward situation he was in so he left.

She watched him leave with a sad expression on her face. Her love! Her love not Yukari love! Was walking away even after he saw her writing he walked away! She was too scared and sad to do anything she just went to her room to sleep the whole thing off.

9/24/09

Evening

He wrapped his arms around her closing her in a warm embrace, and she smiled at him even though he couldn't see the all of the smile he knew it was sincere and true. Even through her painful yelps she held the smile. She became one with him and he became one with her. What else could she want?

"Will you stay with me the whole night?" she asked and he nodded.

He kissed her.

"I always…" she stopped typing

Even though everyone else decided to go out to eat at Wild Duck Burger she stayed home she really didn't want to face Minato and watch him with Yukari. She thought about those two, how they would kiss. Her lips touching his soft lips, his arms around her body, his gentle voice whispering I love you. She couldn't help it any more she broke off into a soft cry. She covered her face as she began to fully cry. Why couldn't she have a body like Yukari? Why couldn't she truly express her feeling for Minato! Why wouldn't he smile at her like he did to Yukari? She heard a quick typing noise on her Laptop, she looked and it now said

"I love you Fuuka Yamagishi." He said and she looked to her left and he was sitting there with that smile she loved. He kissed her and she kissed back. He placed the laptop on the coffee table and gently leaned her back onto the couch. So it wasn't like it was in the Story but this was better.

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This is just a fanfic that I wrote maybe about an year ago about Fuuka and Minato. Its cute and short.

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:iconzonicthehedgehog16:
This is a really great mini story of these two getting together.
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*Alexisisinneed Oct 24, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
It was actually the first fan fic I wrote.
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:iconxxnarutoisminexx:
i really like the story! :D its so cute! x3 i'm happy that fuuka got Minato, they're really cute together :3 in my honest oppion , i think anyone is good with him EXCEPT Yukari and Mitsuru, i'm sorry but those 2 are my least favourite characters, they jsut really bother me. but um hey , could i request a story as well?
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*Alexisisinneed Apr 18, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Umm you can, but forgive me if it takes like forever to do it. A couple of my coworkers is on maternity leave and work has been hectic for and I've been too tired to write anything let alone get on da.
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:iconxxnarutoisminexx:
oh really? then i guess i could ask later when you're not so busy
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*Alexisisinneed Apr 20, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
You should probably ask now because then I have more time to think on what to do so when I finally have the time I can actually do it.
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:iconxxnarutoisminexx:
ah ok then, um could you write a my OC x Minato? she has short green hair and yellow eyes, you can find a picture of her in my album, shes the one next to the blonde hair dude shooting themselves
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*Alexisisinneed Apr 21, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I sure can. Just as long as you don't regret your choice.
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:iconxxnarutoisminexx:
regret who i'm asking to write the story? no i don't regret,i'm very patient and i understand that people have their own lives to deal with.

and also her personality is very mischivious and like to mess around with Minato. Always laughing and having a good time, teasing the heck out of him and sometimes may act like she hates him but really she doesn't. she messes with peoples head and does regret her choices, but when its wth Minato and she does something bad to him she really regrets it and won't go near him or look at him or anything, she just avoids him because of her shame. and i hope you got a good idea of her um shes part of the swim team and shes part of the music club, she plays the violin.she lives in the dorm with the other S.E.E.S people because she has a persona as well, i just havn't thought of it yet. and i thats it , well part of it.
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